mmmmm

a tad too much high end and the screech at the start is out of time, the melody it pretty awesome, fairly cool over all

could be improved alot

He exact same melody for 2 and a half minutes, it's rather repetitive in that respect the percussion could have been used more effectively to give the song more 'drive' which I think is what it lacks. Also the radio effect on the first half doesn't really give the effect desired in my opinion it just sounds annoying instead of sounding old yet classy.